All Comments on 'Shemale Surprise'

Best story I ever read

So the wife has been cheating on her husband for a long time, and is rewarded for it. Not my cup of tea, the disrespect and lack of communication is an excitement killed to me.

The story can’t in there give us more

I loved this story very much and hope it keeps going

Too much yapping.

Oh this is the hottest story I've read yet....bravo

Love it; my best time’s have with a shemale; love the cuddling, the company; to enjoy a wonderful 69 till I’m drunk with her cum, to follow a mutual ass fucking

Oh what I would give to be taken by a trans like he was, with my wife bound to a bed and being fucked by her teen playmates!!!! Great story, I can't wait for more!

I like lots of married couples would be willing to have 3ways with a trans. I know I like it and I want to take herbs to grow my tits but still let my cock work.

very hot story mmmm

Please, please, please, revisit and finish this story line! It is much too open ended and in need of at least 2 more chapters!

Such a great story, Shemale stories always turn me on.

Being gay top or bottom is great stuff. Same lesbians submissive or dominant is also great. I don’t think you’ve ever written anything about an adult white male in your stories who is not depicted as a complete idiot or small dicked fool or asshole.

It would seem anger is your muse.

We are waiting with curiosity when the continuation of the story comes, it is unfinished

Will there be a continuation of the story? I wonder what Mia is going to do. Mary And what did her husband do

Enjoyed the story. Don’t know why it’s taken so long for me to stumble across it. It really begs for a second instalment, the characters are good and there seems to be more story to tell. Stand alone I still give it 5 stars.

That would a sweet eye opener even more with instigating from the wife along with her own desires❤️👅

I was going to give it a 5, but even as role play, I'm turned off by the derogatory name calling. You don't have to call someone a slut or bitch or cocksucker or faggot to show control. That's just Tasteless disrespect.

very good thankyou,,had me dreaming about being anally fucked,,,,,,keep these stories cumming

Great story hopefully there more to come

Hot,... but needs to be continued when the get home. Want to rezd about the fuck fest when Mia and ffiends get them home

This story is my guilty pleasure. Always coming back to it after a while. Although it may seem like a long shot, I desperately hope there is a part 2 where Mary and Mia 'cuckold' the husband. Plus, adding her teenage mistress to the scene will be just as hot.

Shemales are beautiful, wonderful and sooo much fun. Thank you.

I never have had a she-male and it give me such a hard-on to share with my wife. Wow!

Wow. I was a cross dresser as a boy married very young wonderful at first I knew she was fucking her boss our oldest son is not mine. She fucked my boss, my friends, at least two women I know of. Then in our mid sixties she confessed. I thought you deserved to know. I asked her so you realize this is killing me. She said I started fucking my dad and his friends when I was 12. Got some therapy found some glory holes and started catching up.

I agree can you please do a part 2.

I know this was written years ago, but it would be great if a part 2 was written that followed the rest of the story. Not only the threesome with Mia and his wife, but also including the teens that took his wife.

His faithful wife is nowhere near as faithful as she leads him to believe.

And why does every story that involves a guy exploring his bi side always devolve into humiliation and name calling. Very highschool. I think a lot of authors need to grow up a bit and enter the 21st century.

please do part two... or story of his wife and her mistress

Loved it.

I hadn’t read this in quite some time and as expected, it’s just as good. It’s like a fine wine, it ages beautifully while growing an intoxicating bouquet.

It was great but don't stop there!

I like how this couple is able to explore their fantasies without rancor. I like the shemale sex. Not so much into the humiliation. Still a fun read.

Oh my god that was so hot. I’ve been with a few transgendered women over the years and it’s always a great feeling when they fuck your ass. Your story deserves no less than a 20 star rating…….. 🤤

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Hot story. Would love to be him and serve a shemale. I hope to read more. Great job

I love how the wife I involved in her husband getting taken by a big shemale cock, and is taken herself too like a pair of little sluts.

I'd love my wife Rhian to watch me take a huge shemale cock in me, and her to whisper in my ear that I look so hot and adorable being fucked hard!

As I take the huge spray of spunk in my ass I shoot into my wife's panties and she feeds it to me then licks the shemale Dom clean ready to fuck her as they put me in a little chastity tube!

This has been a fantasy of mine and this story just made me think of this and got me so hard!

So ENLIGHTENING!!!

457. Interesting that the wife set up the whole thing including her own submission. We got few of the details of Mia’s activities with the other women. Those are left to the imagination.

Terrible

Absolutely loved it!!!! I'd love to be with a shemale!!! Great story can't wait for more of your work. Thank you!!!

Love it!

I need to be Mia’s bitch

Loved it hun

This story is fucking hot!!! Now all I need is Mia's phone number !

Baloney. Rape pure and simple. They'd both be in prison for a LONG time. You NEVER imagine that there would be any fallout from your characters actions.

Bi far the best, Hottest cock hardening story I have ever read.Thank you and please a sequel!

I like it wish that was me in the story

My all time favourite story on this site. I've lost count of the number of times I've read it. I sincerely hope that you eventually write a sequel in which we see more of Mia dominating Robert and Mary.

I aspire to one day write stories a fraction this quality. So well tailored together.

Would have liked to see what happened after they all got back home.

Loved this story. Very sexy and hot. I also like shemales I never have been with one but I think I would do everything he did in this story..

Tom

My favorite story by far. I would do anything to see a video made from this story. It would be amazing!

WoW!! So incredibly fucking hot!! This is my dream, my fantasy!! I came soo much jerking off multiple times to this story & my cum tasted great too! The best part is that my 1st ex-wife is named Mia & I kept picturing her with a big, fat cum spewing cock.

Great fucking story silkstockingslover!! 😋🤓

Nooooo, I need more!!! Great story. Would love to see a 5, 6, and 7 to this.

Wow!

You are the very best writer on Literotica. Just the very best.

Extremely hot. And the wife set it up.

So hot! Loved to Wrap my Lips around your Tip as you Cum! For a Sweet Release 👅👅💦

Incredible story. Couldn't stop reading. Can't believe how turned on by it I became. Makes me wonder if I would ever give in like Robert did. Unfortunately we'll probably never know.

Wonderful story! About a third of the way through, I realized that I had read it several years before but apparently did not rate it or leave comments. On the one hand, I apologize for not commenting the first time around. But on the other hand, I am glad that I didn't because I feel better prepared now than before.

I recently came across a quote that goes something like, "If you want to avoid criticism. do nothing, say nothing and be nothing." While I do not wish to bash your critics, I mention this quote to support and encourage you to continue writing and posting your superb stories.

Robert didn't just give in to Mia out of the blue. He had read shemale porn and fantasized about sex with one, including sucking cock. Mary, his wife, was aware of his infatuation and set him up with Mia, a friend she knew to be transsexual. In addition, he was aware of her desire for a lesbian encounter. They had even joked half-seriously about their fantasies coming to fruition.

With this prior conditioning, it is not surprising to me that he did not resist the unfolding agenda orchestrated by Mia.

Speaking of Mia, I see her in a different light than some others. Instead of a controlling, domineering bitch, I see her as a confident woman who knows what she wants and is determined to get it. While seemingly aggressive, she appears to have keen insight into the human psyche. These attributes give her the ability to get people to do her bidding. Just as she seduced strait-laced Carrie in a matter of minutes, she easily could have made any of Robert’s fawning male co-workers her bitch without much effort.

Finally, words like “faggot” and “sissy” are no longer seen as insulting or demeaning. Instead, they are now embraced with pride by those who identify with those labels. Robert was far from offended when called faggot by Mia. Instead, his arousal appeared to intensify as intended by Mia. Far from anger, he responded cheerfully by referring to her as “Mistress”.

Once again, this was a wonderfully, well-written story.

Fucking hot,I so want you to have your way with me.lol

Very good.. as always. I loved it. it so strengthens my fantasies.

The story was ok until the humiliation and slave and mistress talk came out and now how his wife is a sub to a friend friends daughter and Mia, just to much the fun flirting in the car was good the teasing great but the couple becoming subs is over used

One really good story, lets have more. jildijow@outlook.com

Your a excellent writer! Even the things I probably wouldn’t do, I was persuaded that could with the scenario you painted… very liberal wife.

Every time I read this I CAN’T stop visualizing how awesome an experience that would be!

Wildly hot please continue

Quite convoluted...Mary going down on a hairy cunt got my attention...personal fave...very doubtful her teen mistress(es-?) has a muffin

Absolutely Great story. I love it.

From the tons of comments, I see that there are a lot of kinky perverts like me out there!

Your story is totally HOT, one of my absolutely favorites and ticked all of my boxes in one way or another; shemales, nylons, nasty sex talk, oral sex and anal sex!

As much as I wish I were, I'm not a shemale. I'm a totally gay crossdresser and a bottom. I'm not, like in your story, interested in girls and I don't live with anyone. Although we don't live together, I do have a steady boyfriend.

There is something about nylons, especially pantyhose, that makes me sooo horny! It's not just how they look or how they feel as a silky and slippery dress rubs against my pantyhose clad legs, there is just something about them, a nonphysical feeling that can't be put into words, that just screams sex!

Like you said in your story, sucking cock comes so naturally, it's just instinctual. I love to suck my boyfriend's cock, even after we are all fucked out and he can't get it up again.

I love it when my boyfriend talks dirty like that while we fuck. It drives me into a sexual frenzy when he tells me how he loves his little cock sucking sissyfag, cum slut. It drives me to a sexual frenzy when when we are fucking and he tells me how he is going fill my cunt with his sperm and knock me up.

loved the story please have part 2 with all the people Mary, Mia, Carrie, Angela and her mother while Robert watches

Amazing..I hope there will be a 2nd part to this wonderful story!

Wonderful story, very erotic., no it was damn horny/ I wish I was in Robert's position

Loved it, a great fantasy to have. Part 2?

Loved all the twists and turns.

I love dominate shemail stories, I too should try

Beyond awesome, absolutely delicious story. Please continue!

This one made me create a new library titled read again. Thank you

If there was ever a story that deserves to be continued, this is it!

Love all of your story. Would love for you to add to this like what happens when they all get together

This story was so hot and had me hard the entire time! Will there be follow ups? Damn I hope so.

Everything you write drives me wild, lol.

Great story! Who wouldn't want to be dominated by a gorgeous shemale? And while his wife is getting the lesbian ride of her life too? Excellent incorporation

Got me so hard I stuck a vacuum cleaner handle up my ass and had a prostate orgasm. Then I stroked my cock and cum in my hand and swallowed every drop

One of the best, well-written stories I've had the pleasure of reading on Literotica. Altho the shenanigans get increasingly unlikely and complex, that's what fantasy is for. A real pleasure to read, thank you!

Too much use of derogatory name calling during sex was a but of a turn off. Very predictable from the start.

Wish I was that cock whore and cum slut.

Sillliwilli@gmsil.com

Wonderful. I xould like to be the bitch. Suck the shemale before bending and take her big cock in,my sluttyass

Solène the bitch

Decent story, but by the end I really disliked Mia. She started out seeming like a cool girl, but by the end it was clear she was actually a manipulative sociopath... I think it would have been a much more fun story if she hadn't turned out to be such a bad person.

It always continuously makes me so hard to realize that I definitely could be turned into a cocksucking faggot without any resistance.

Wonderful, sensual story, wishing I was Robert! My clittie is dripping.

I dream of sucking huge she make yummy juicy cock

I need a part 2 in a hurry!

Also, I hate the word faggot. This is for a gay man. Our guy is not gay. And the deal the wife made is unfair. She is with multiple people and he is with just one. She gets to be fucked by Mia but does he get to fuck Angela and her friends? A long talk is needed between husband and wife before anything else happens.

Yeah I get it it’s just a story, just my thoughts.

I really loved the story. Definitely a fantasy of mine, sort of.

Don’t agree with giving up the wife or any plans that were made not including me in the conversation.

A lot of criticisms of this story boil down to "I don't agree with the characters' morals, therefore I find it implausible/unsexy." This ignores the fact that erotic stories, for the most part, are designed precisely to show people acting outside normal boundaries. If an average person's day consisted of fucking the first random attractive person they encountered after leaving the house, we wouldn't write stories about it. It would probably become a staple of stand-up comedy:

"Don't you hate it when the person you bang on the way to work ends up being the least attractive person you meet all day? And there's no way to put 'em off without pissing them off! I mean, every so often you'll meet those beautiful people who can afford to be picky, and they're like, 'I'm saving it for Happy Hour!' Me, I'm just hoping I can make it through my thirties before I have to take Viagra every morning....Isn't that the worst? You feel pathetic, she feels unattractive, and it's been scientifically proven you can only say the words, 'It's not your fault' about 20 times in your life before suicide starts to seem like a valid life choice!"

So no one really wants REALISTIC erotica; we just want the words to make a movie in our heads that holds together for a few minutes at least. Personally, I couldn't buy that a man who's THAT obsessed with "she-males" (I know many have problems with that term, and I respect that, but it's perfectly believable that the main character would use it) wouldn't IMMEDIATELY start looking for little "clues" as soon as they met up. To me, that's what kept me from identifying with him, which meant I really didn't get into the story. But it didn't offend me in the slightest.

And anyone who can't guess that a story in the "Transsexuals and Crossdressers" category, that starts out introducing a married couple, will have extra-marital sex at some point, doesn't quite grasp the basics of this whole 'erotic story' business.

Would like to knowhow thing went after there weekend and the plans the she male had made and how that turned out.

I loved it so much i wish that something like that would happen with me

Love the story! Would like to hear from wife’s perspective. Maybe how the flirting and teasing all started her down this path!

Waste of time reading.