All Comments on 'She's a Naughty Little Housewife Ch. 07'

by BeautifulAmanda

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Naughy?

She is a full blown disguesting slut, actually I don't care what you write about her, she is just nasty and sick, not erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
you can end

the story whenever you want, the sooner the better. no main character is ok, cheating, lieying. you wanna live there, so go. but this is definitly not erotic anymore

herve_gherve_gover 15 years ago
Not bad, but you could use an editor...

The dialogue could be better, word choice could be improved upon ("going to" , not "gonna", that kind of thing). Overall it's not bad, but with a little bit of polishing it could be much better.

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Pregged?

I was hoping that her husband would find her out and pregnant by Danny before the story ended. You have a golden opportunity for more chapters to this hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
this can be better

Amanda is cheating and getting cheated on, and she is upset ? Now why not just leave for Daniel and give them all more of what they want?

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Whorewife cunt.

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