All Comments on 'She's Special Ch. 02'

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RopeteaseRopeteasealmost 14 years ago
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great story waiting for the next

Scurvydog44035Scurvydog44035almost 14 years ago
Even better

I love the continuation of Kates story. I love how Clint loves kids and seam to relate to Sean. I think he is portraid as to much of an ass sometimes but thats just me.

luv_romanceluv_romancealmost 14 years ago
loving this.....

continue continue pleaseee.... i want to read more. :)

catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
more more more

i get the feeling that this is one hell of a roller coaster a coming up, and im aon for the ride, keep it up you already have two good main characters and the uncle and the workers all sound like they are going to be fun keep it coming

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 14 years ago
Gotta love the

sensitive alpha male. I like how the story is going. I hope you take your time and really flesh out the characters. No need to rush through the story. Detail and a slow and steady pace are good. Looking forward to chapter 3.

HatsudaHatsudaalmost 14 years ago
Like the way this is going!

You write about these folks as if you knew them; keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Alex, I'll take DICTIONARY for $100.00

You do not need to spend that much for a dictionary, but buy one and see the difference between throes and throws. You wanted throes not throws. Also, did you want 'here' in the line "...kissing here forever..." or did you want 'her'?

Even with thoseerrors I enjoyed the story and gave it a 5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
He is special, too.

Love your story characters. Every one deserve a second chance at love, same for Clint & Cat!

Keep up your good work!

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