All Comments on 'She's Watching'

Please comment! This is my first submission.

Welcome to the world of Literotica as a writer. Pretty good start. It was short but good. Keep writing and entertaing us. I can understand how it feels when it's your first submission. Anyways, Thanks for sharing your story and good luck for your future projects.

you have an intense sexy mind, and it shows in your writing. I like your inclusion of details that make me feel present in the situation!