All Comments on 'Shift! Ch. 02'

This series has started brilliantly. I'd award it 3 fingers, which is what I needed to use to gain some relief

It's not often that an erotic story truly blends romance, kink, transgression and sweetness, and this series is doing so remarkably well! This is engagingly light-hearted, but so very hot too!

I hope this will find a very wide audience. It certainly deserves it.

These stories loose 85% of their impact when written in the third person. To take a reader on this trip write it from the first person. Better write in sections from both pov's. Idea and story are great. Execution leaves me detatched.

well written hot story looking forword to part three

This is an amazing series. Keep it up! Looking forward to part three.

Bring on chapter 3! First 2 were great. Can't wait till it comes out. Don't let it die.

Great writing style, the concept is something too few writers dabble into, and you've thrown a nice twist of your own on it. Keep it up, eagerly waiting for part 3

I love the stories I can't wait for the next installment to see how you end it I get the felling that you may keep them in each others bod but you are the wrighter have the fun I know you have wrighting them and keep up the good work!

I normally vote but have never commented on a submission. Please... please, pretty please give us more of your story. Eventually I would like to know if Robert fully becomes Kayla or if this becomes a vacation game. Next chapter... maybe, what Kayla as Robert's night was like. (sorry it took so long to comment, the Ts' stories come faster than I can read them)

A great story - can we please have part 3? Can Kayla find another spell to make Robert a girl forever? How about making him Kayla's twin?

NOW! ;) If you don't continue this story...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Please, finish the tale.

Fuckin A!!!!!!!!

please continue this story

For the love of god, give us some release. Add part three.

Aside from a few blunders with mixed He's and Her's, the theme was perfect, the artistry with matching his mind with her body, the imagined logic of how a Gay male might envision thinking of another male anticipating a first blow job .... Your reading public ... And the rest of us wishful thinkers, hoping such a Shift were made possible for us: Please, PLEASE come back to us. You have the skill to craft enticingly erotic situations and the opportunity to take this in so many directions - perhaps her experiences with approaching a male in a Gay encounter as well as Her Lez fillings from her male physical attributes. I'd be enthralled to work with you to continue this experience - in word and deed.

Just read this story would love to read furthe installments of this story maybe from Kaylas perspective of chatting women up & Robert being chatted up by men also is there a catch that if Robert gets pregnant in Kaylas body will the shift be permanent etc. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write some more for this story

Sadiexx

I wish this could happen in real life

Should continue this series with the wife (as a man) getting fucked by another .an so they can compare notes of first big sexual experience for each