All Comments on 'Shopping Can be Fun!'

Very good story. captured my attention and kept it until I cam all over the place. Hope to read more about thess lovely shopping sluts.

The fantasy of the sexy sales girl is very hot. However, the slutty talk was just a little over the top to be believable. I like the dirty talk very much, but it was used a bit too much in this story. Also, it's hard for me to believe a woman wrote this story. The prose have a man's touch all over it.

The idea is hot - Sexy sales girl 'helps' pretty customer and boyfriend joins in, but the dialogue really detracts from the story. It's like a badly scripted porn movie. It would have been great if you created a more realistic environment and more realistic interaction for these characters... The possibility of being caught, the boyfriend realizing that he's living out an amazing fantasy and relishing it - not calling them sluts and saying he's going to rape her.

Please try again. A little more realism would make your next fantasy story so much better!

I loved this story...between the threesome and the dirty talk..I was wet within minutes of reading it. Thanks a bunch!

story takes too long for changing room and it sounds like that must have been a really big changing room - unrealistic. and the language is way to coarse for the situation. no need for words like rape; that just detracts from the story. you laid a good groundwork but didn't build the story well.

This is horrible. Good thought but put together badly.