All Comments on 'Shopping For Sex Ch. 01'

by Phantom101

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Your editor sucks

Pray versus prey learn the difference.

Ware versus wear learn the difference. Small errors like this are the difference between meh and great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
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Liked the story a lot. The only thing that bothered me is the word "pray"...it should be "prey".

smsopkosmsopkoabout 20 years ago
very good

Loved Your story. Nothing more exciting than being forced to submit to a stranger, haveing all your control taken from you. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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