All Comments on 'Short Tail Ch. 01'

I guess that's one way to ensure there's a next generation.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

beautiful!!!!!!!

are you sure this shouldn't be in the humor section? made me laugh!

Boring and puerile

You started out GREAT. But, the ending was too quick and just totally inadequate. Surely, you can do better.

Can't wait for the next chapter

What a sad little gayboy you are, is it all you can think about delving in shit, try gay weekly or some other site but please NOT here

Good story idea but it ended too quickly. You could have ended the story after after you fucked her ass for the first time.

How about MORE of this one, ADD to it!!!!!!!!!

LOOK U ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS OF INCEST/ANAL STORIES THAT LITEROTICA HAS. MAKE 'EM LONGER AND MORE DETAILED, AND SUBMIT WITH MORE FREQUENCEY. YOU HAVE FANS TO CONSIDER!

You had a great beginning..middle ...but the end came to fast...i would have liked to have seen what happened while he was fucking her mother...what she said, and why she was so open to her son fucking her...I've read all ur work cant wait for new chapters and stories

Really loved the story but ended sort of abruptly fo me. Now if there was a continuation....

Started off ok then it was like you were running late for the bus or something, the ending lacked any thought & was just rushed ruined the whole thing

Started off ok then it was like you were running late for the bus or something, the ending lacked any thought & was just rushed ruined the whole thing

ok great story but i have to say you should have a part two

Wham! Bam! Thank you, ma'm!

Part one wasn't long enough to be a chapter. Haven't looked at 'chapter' two yet, but I think the whole story should have been one complete episode.

Paul shove your tounge in her winking asshole had gape it open. Eat tht rosebud

Wow, an AWESOME Beginning! I forward to reading the rest of this storyline!

You really are going to stop a story there? *