by fockeydey
Good storyline. Very sexy. My friendly advice though is to take a writing class (or at least basic english grammar class). Many, many run on sentences with very minimal punctuation makes the story hard to read. A GOOD editor might help. Keep trying. You have a good start.
With your ninth word you wrecked the story!!
Since I KNOW that I was NOT there, and DID NOT participate, there is zero possibility of any believability.
No believability = total waste of time both writing and reading.
Sorry, I'm out!!
Late for work
On his way to work, he decides to sneak back home for a rousting session in the shower. A sweet story.
Time for romance
On his way to work he returns home to surprise her in the shower. Fun in the suds!
Time Out
A few minutes to surprise your partner for a morning workout.