All Comments on 'Shyam, Savita Bhabi & Kajal Ch. 01'

Cant wait for the second part!!

Waiting for the next parts!!!

but the taste of the pudding is yet to come. All the best.

i liked the erotic intimation betweeen savita bhabi and shyam and request author to keep the series going specially between shyam and savita bhabi

Excellent language and style. It's almost like a classic

Excellent story. My only nitpick is the use of the word admonish. It does not mean what you probably wanted to convey.