All Comments on 'Shyam, Savita Bhabi & Kajal Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Minor quibble......

Since the story started with Kajal asking him, shouldn;t it finish with her aroused by the retelling and Kajal and Shyam doing it? Other than that its great as usual. Please do not take such long breaks.

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