by Mortuis
I see that you have been on the Literotica sight since you last posted to this story, I hope this indicates that you will eventually finish with the other three auditions and at least some of his adventures after his acceptance. It would also be nice to show (maybe by flashbacks) what happened with Sara. I thought after the first chapter that she had died.
I would rate this story asa NEGATIVE 20+!
3 chapters not written at NEGATIVE 5 EACH!
My experience as a BOYTOY as NEGATIVE 5+!!
for the above reason you got a 1 from me for all 3 chapters!!!