All Comments on 'Signs'

What happened? The story was ok but when an ending was being formed it just cut off and then it was all repeated? Was that on purpose and if so, why?

i know you mentioned on the boards that you thought the vernacular would detract but it didn't phase me and i liked the sexually assertive busybody neighbor girl. :)

Like Anon, I wondered what happened. The story didn't seem to end, before it started again. I also wondered why, in the first sex scene, Mavis gave a hand job instead of a blow job. All in all, the story seemed quite confusing. BTW, the British words were not a problem for me either.

Very hot.

The story has been repeated and I don't know why. In its transposition from my computer onto the site a big tract has been repeated. I'm sorry, its unintended. I'm also required to rate the story and as its mine I don't want to so I'm giving it a big fat zero. I just want to apologise.

A bit confusing that one......there seems to be 3 copies joined togther...........

not a bad story.....

story *****

presentation **

Apart from the duplication, and the confusing section with the nosy neighbour- good story and erotic. 4 stars.