All Comments on 'Slave Training Day 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great fucken job

hey this story is getting better and better each time please continue to write more

sweetrose61094sweetrose61094over 12 years ago
WOW

What can I say, WOW! this was a completely awesome story. I enjoyed it. the only criticism I would say is you need to reread your stuff before you post there are some parts where i stumbled. But again REALLY GR8

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Fantasy or not, why would a woman allow herself to be treated this viciously? Submission does not have to mean abuse and anal rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bad

No don't bother with day 3! Shouldn't have bothered with day 1 or 2 for that matter!

ronitjosephronitjosephabout 7 years ago
admire

Very good writing with good imagination and appropriate words

Keep writing on.

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