by slave_m
hey this story is getting better and better each time please continue to write more
What can I say, WOW! this was a completely awesome story. I enjoyed it. the only criticism I would say is you need to reread your stuff before you post there are some parts where i stumbled. But again REALLY GR8
Fantasy or not, why would a woman allow herself to be treated this viciously? Submission does not have to mean abuse and anal rape.
No don't bother with day 3! Shouldn't have bothered with day 1 or 2 for that matter!
Very good writing with good imagination and appropriate words
Keep writing on.