All Comments on 'Slayer vs. Succubus'

One of the best

I love the ending... I knew he was gonna die... but which slayer in Sunnydale. There have been 3 (and 1/2 cause one was a robot).

Loved it. Always fun when some arrogant bastard is taken down a peg...

He'll be smarter next time... Oh wait, guess not :D

ive read all of your succubi stories...

but this is the best...coz its rough and full of fights..and short..!!

just wish he cum when he first 'bang' the succubus on the wall...

that would be more erotic....

more short succubus stories please....with arrogant muscular sexy gladiatorial men..!!

I would have given you six, with one extra for the Buffy reference at the end! lol

Another great succubus read, thank you

You just gotta root for the girl,haha! Good story!XD

Awesome story. Good reference to Buffy too!

That was a riot! Funny, sexy and well-written. The last sentence made me snort my drink. Buffy fan I presume? If so *high-five*

Hmm, wonder if I can talk you into writing me some BtVS fan-fic. :D

Great arousing story! Succubus rule! ;)

I second the previous comment, the only thing that could have made this better would have been a "NOTE TO READER: turn on rock music then sit back and enjoy".

The only thing missing was some rock music...

Manyeyedhydra once again you hit another one out of the park! Keep up the great story telling, Thanks.

Manyeyedhydra, you have yet to stop amazing me at how well you can write a succubus story. Great job with this one and I love the ending.

My first read of a succubus story. Very nicely done, carried me right through to the end!

Ha, hah... priceless ending hahahah... The type of sex-heavy succubi story I always look for!

Great story, the ending was priceless., Sunnydale, LAMO