All Comments on 'Slayer's Wolf Ch. 04'

Sky isn't going to be to happy when she wakes to find a bite mark on her neck or is she? That she needs time to think on Ron's proposal shows he's not right for her, but will she realize that? And what of Leon and Alex having to leave right away for pack business. Does that business by chance have to do w/a slayer? Maybe Leon's slayer?

I think you are doing a great job on your first story. I look forward to following it and discovering how a slayer can come to love a were. Please continue.

I love this series pleeeease keep writing!

I love it but the word is MINE not mines

i really love this story, it has the perfect amount of friction between sky and leon. i hope she gives him a run for his money though, and i really love his confidence and alpha personality (he's going to need it to handle her). anyway, great job. love what you've given us so far, keep it up!

I kinda want to know how it went with Cloe and Alex

Looking forward to more.

Really wish the chapters were longer but regardless of that this is a wonderful read. Next chapter pleassssseeeeeee.

Please write more! It's a great story, and I love where you're going with it. Go werewolfs!

She's gonna kill him! Or at least try to. Let the fun begin!

You have a great plot and some promising characters. A good editor would really help with the errors. Mines is NOT a word unless you are talking diamond or coal mines. There are a few others as well but that one is a major detractor from the amazing story you have written.

We're at chapter 5. That's right! Chapter 5 and we still have NO IDEA why she tried to kill a defenseless mother, father and cub WAY BACK in chapter 1. KILL! Then she kills her longterm partner b/c he's a vampire. Why are vampires bad in this universe?

We have no idea what a slayer is or why they are allowed to kill werewolves. Nor have we been provided with info about precinct 13.

Is she some sort of cop who kills werewolves helter skelter. One would think that someone paid to slay werewolves (potentially other things we wouldn't know about) would slay them even on vacation. At the very least, for this to be realistic, wouldn't she notify precinct 13. A good slayer (cop) would.

Oh, yeah! We have no clue as to what is going on b/c the author hasn't provided one.

As a werewolf story, this reads great. But if you're writing about an alternate universe you have to define it. Minus the witch, the word "slayer" could be switched with "psychotic killer" and the storyline would work perfectly well. Why?

It's pointless to go on and on - chapter after chapter - w/o establishing the 7 questions ie who, what, when, why, etc. of this alternate universe.

Enjoyable as a story but pointless about a reality in which witches, werewolves, and vampires exist.

All the best!.

Hi. Ur spelling errors and wrong use of words are kinda funny and make me think you need to change your autocorrect or spellchecker. I like your story however. Its different frm all those wolfy stories. Good job. Keep it up.

You need an editor. So far, your "heroine" is a slutty, low class, psychopathic killer. Why should we care whether she lives happily ever after or not?

Duh! at the beginning it was said that she had been indoctrinated to kill!!! and as for the "low class" comment: I think you can't handle a heroine that's a woman of color and besides EVERYBODY USES PROFANITY!! GET OVER IT! I've heard people with PhDs talk worse.

I thank it is a fun little story