All Comments on 'Slutty, Size Queen Nicky Ch. 01'

Nicky knows what she wants and won't settle for less. Actually she did the lad a favor by letting him down easy

Well-written but not enough sex. Purely on writing it's a B+, but you're sort of wasting people's time if you don't put this in the no-sex section.

This was a sexy story, but it had no sex.

Don't listen to the other dullard's critique; this was fantastic! An excellent opening salvo; I keep checking for part two. It was stellar!

A good start, but it ended before anything actually happened.

keep up the good work

"White bred suburban town" ?

Or.... "her smirking up at me, satisfied with her affect on me, ", Affect??

Had a worthwhile surprise ending tho.

Too bad it isn't worth using the written language.