All Comments on 'Smoking Has Its Risks'

Interesting story with a excellent twist at the end. Just goes to show, you shouldn't play games like that.

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No, not erotic. Why would any decent human being watch his girlfriend be raped, doing nothing to stop it?

Worthless.

-- KVK

although i liked the story and it was written well...i think...damn what a asshole and wimp!!...but to each their own and made for a good read...thank you for sharing with us. respectfully fan in TExas naynay

It's a good story, written very well and at first it was okay.

Disturbing at the end though

Still a good story, just...the ending is a little too much

story.