All Comments on 'Snippets: End of the Game'

Very good story, have just about read all of yours and they are good.. Keep them coming,

Some action at last!!!!

Just kidding! I love your 'Chinese Torture' style!

You can feel the storyline hardening! :-)

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This has been a very good quick series. I like the fact that you're just relaying a certain instance, then moving on. Gives you more room to be creative. I hope you keep going with this series.

Great story. Very hot writing. I could see the characters and feel their excitment.

Please keep it going. It's excellent.

This is really hot your work is briliant. The whole idea of pre shows in front of wife I loved would of loved more...

I cummed all over my computer reading this

That was good and very erotic.

I know you have stopped writing and it makes me sad.......I just love your style.......I can feel myself in the characters......you describe the situation so well......I particularly love the forplay and anticipation. I have love all of your stories.........you are the best writer on this site.

I keep looking for a new entry from you......hopefully you will surpise me one day!!

Loving it.

"The game was 5 to 3 hun, we lost." - Doesn't seem like he or C lost!