All Comments on 'Snow Storm'

Yet another, "I love my spouse and would never do anything to threaten my marriage" only to threaten the marriage. If ya want to write a cheating story, write a cheating story. Adding this makes your protagonist a hypocrite. And NO, it is NOT a matter of opinion. That's what it is. You disagree, tough. You're wrong.

with the first comment - you can't have it both ways. Either she loves her husband and won't cheat, or she cheats and shows she has no love whatever for him.

Simple!

One point.

if you are going to cheat. I know, she was faithful for 12 years blah blah blah. Hey, if you have an open marriage, fine, fuck away but in this case romanticising infidelity is like puttin perfume on shit, it still stinks.

I thought it was a very nice story, well written, nice buildup, I loved the elements, I'm definatly going to read some more of your stuff.

recommended reading, personally I don't look at this as a place for moral judgement, rather a place for erotic writing, which I think this is a great example of. Keep up the good work!!