by Bluegray
Thie tale was exquisite. "So Terribly Lost" is very well written. For me, poor spelling and grammer can ruin the story and Bluegrey definately did not do that. In fact, I only noticed one place where a letter was omitted. In stead of ruining this tale for me, Bluegrey did a fantastic job of spinning his web and drawing me into the story. He did such a good job of it that I could envision myself taking the place of George. I greatly appreciated that and all I have left to say is, "THANK YOU"!
Hello Blue,
Where the hell were these girls in MY trout fishing days?
Good story ... can't wait for my wife to read it ... that'll light her fuse!
Ron Chee