All Comments on 'Sold Ch. 01'

Oh please please please write more! You left me balanced on the edge of orgasm just as badly as the girl...its torture!

I would love to read the continuation. Thank you !

Olnova

really really need to continue this. It's so well written and so extrodinarily sexy and sensual. I almost cried with frustration when it ended. Please, more?

Danielle

Though you need the assistance of a good editor, this has the makings of an excellent story - suspenseful and sensual. I do hope that you'll write more.

part 2 please...its great..

i must agree with your other fans, this is wonderful and one of the most intriguing stories that have recently been written, please continue this, you could easily turn this into a novel/novella or at least many chapters giving your fans many days/nights of great reads. i look forward to seeing more, please don't stop or disapoint us...this is going to be good and if you need suggestions there are many who read who would be glad to give you ideas, including myself on how they would love to see this story go...take it slow and detailed...it will go far and you will be on the HOT list asap. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay

Excellent story so far.

I'm waitung for more

I see you wrote a prelude to Sold, does that mean that chapter 2 is forthcoming? Anxiously awaiting chapter 2.

MORE MORE MORE

Pleaseee make another chapter to this!!!