All Comments on 'Soldier Humiliates Captured Beauty'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Could be better!

The story definitely has promise if it weren't in the second person. The 'you....' shouldn't be used. I'd much rather read a story in the first person or third person... or with named characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Body Parts ???

i thought a cunt and a pussy were the same thing !

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Flaws!

One minute she us in her thong and top, next a dress. Your writing lacks consistency.

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