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You need to do a little better job of editing. You have the same problem I do: missing letters (no instead of not) and other things. Sometimes you miss a word. The following cracked me up. Sorry.

Ginger, for one, stopped in first thing that morning with a blanket and a pillow from home. While Lauren had gone the night before on the bare carpet of her office floor, she still had two nights ahead of her in the office.

This came out very funny, especially since the following paragraphs have her in a pickle over having to go to the restroom. I would get in trouble with my wife if I went on the carpet.