by BarflyJack
From your story: "her ass was small, but both cheeks were nice and rounded. They met through mutual friends when they were 19"
Wow - her ass cheeks didn't meet until they were nineteen!? :)
The "Anonymous" post "Estranged ass cheeks" was actually by me
Please consider the use of an editor. Some of your sentences just do not make any sense example: "Because of Nicoles subdued sex drive, Connor had to was left with a constant craving. "
Sorry for the errors lol I had to delete some things to get it posted, so certain sentences don't make any sense, unfortunately. And a few things were from typing too fast. I just got burnt out on having to go through it to get it submitted, I should have looked over it one last time. I'll be sure to get in touch with and editor when I write the other chapters, though. Thanks for laboring through my rookie mistakes, hope you found some enjoyment in the story though.
I really enjoyed reading this, but when is chapter 2 coming?! AAAAH tension is killing me.
You have amazing writing! :) I'm soooo excited for the next part!!