All Comments on 'Something Primal Ch. 01'

You have amazing writing! :) I'm soooo excited for the next part!!

Cannot wait for the next part! Amazing writing!! :)

Been waiting forever to read the next part!

I really enjoyed reading this, but when is chapter 2 coming?! AAAAH tension is killing me.

Rly good i'm eager to read what's up next

When is Chapter 2 coming? Been waiting and waiting for this!

Great story so far

Sorry for the errors lol I had to delete some things to get it posted, so certain sentences don't make any sense, unfortunately. And a few things were from typing too fast. I just got burnt out on having to go through it to get it submitted, I should have looked over it one last time. I'll be sure to get in touch with and editor when I write the other chapters, though. Thanks for laboring through my rookie mistakes, hope you found some enjoyment in the story though.

Hope you post another chapter soon

Please consider the use of an editor. Some of your sentences just do not make any sense example: "Because of Nicoles subdued sex drive, Connor had to was left with a constant craving. "

The "Anonymous" post "Estranged ass cheeks" was actually by me

From your story: "her ass was small, but both cheeks were nice and rounded. They met through mutual friends when they were 19"

Wow - her ass cheeks didn't meet until they were nineteen!? :)