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by phildalegend
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Anonymousalmost 14 years agoAhhh, wow...
I don't want to depress you too much dude, but you pretty much got everything in this story wrong. Everything.
Not an incest tale.
No continuity.
Not believable or plausible.
Unrealistic dialog.
Everyone behaved like they were aliens.
Could have been a hot story.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoOne Of The Worst!
One of the the VERY worst.
A kind word? Never write again.
digdaddyrichalmost 14 years agoIt's in the wrong genre
The story was OK, but not what I thought it would be.
No incest here
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoDuh
That is thr greatest load of shit I have ever read, no incest & really an extremely crappy story all round. Don't flex your brain any further by trying to write anymore PLEASE
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI'm guessing English isn't your first language and they didn't go over the definition of incest in ESL
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