All Comments on 'Sorority Pledge Ch. 06'

You did a great job with this story. I really enjoyed the whole thing. Sad to see it end so quickly.

I want to thank all of you who read the entire story. In doing so you have read my first novel, erotic or otherwise. I did a little research and Sorority Pledge qualifies.

Read all chapters when they came out. Hate the way the new mom is forgiven. I am not part of the BTB crowd, but she made her kids lives' a nightmare for 18 years. Just to teach them something?

Well done overall. Enjoyed it as a whole.

Val

Meant to say..."Mixed"

Loved the story as it developed, perhaps a bit too much time in the sorority 'pranks' but overall a five star effort. Unlike some you knew when and how to end this, good job. Thanks.

Well done, indeed!

A wonderful end to a great story, but also sad that Nate didn't live to see his son.

I think it woud have been nice to end this before the epilogue, and revisit these characters at a later date. I think after some some time away, you could have envisioned some new story-line for Hillary, Sherlyn (with Terrance in tow), and Peter. Maybe even a good confrontation with Uncle Samuel and his son.

It's too bad that Peter has to settle for the occasional tryst, with Hillary, in the future, rather than finding a wife who could compliment him. But, that's just my opinion.

I really enjoyed the ending, but to me it really went off the rails at the end. It was really disappointing after enjoying the early installments.

Well done and well written, I enjoyed all aspects of each chapter. The story had a great mix of erotica and plot. I'm looking forward to future stories.

One f the best if not the best I have read here hope you write more

good story kept my attention

I know I read this stuff to get excited and hot. But I truly love it when I am intrigued enough by the actual story to skim through the sex to get to the storyline itself. Fantastic

I like the story.

Thank you for writing it.

Very good story - up until the rushed ending.

Because of that final rush I'm only giving 4*