by GhostHunterDude
Very good story - up until the rushed ending.
Because of that final rush I'm only giving 4*
I know I read this stuff to get excited and hot. But I truly love it when I am intrigued enough by the actual story to skim through the sex to get to the storyline itself. Fantastic
Well done and well written, I enjoyed all aspects of each chapter. The story had a great mix of erotica and plot. I'm looking forward to future stories.
I really enjoyed the ending, but to me it really went off the rails at the end. It was really disappointing after enjoying the early installments.
I think it woud have been nice to end this before the epilogue, and revisit these characters at a later date. I think after some some time away, you could have envisioned some new story-line for Hillary, Sherlyn (with Terrance in tow), and Peter. Maybe even a good confrontation with Uncle Samuel and his son.
It's too bad that Peter has to settle for the occasional tryst, with Hillary, in the future, rather than finding a wife who could compliment him. But, that's just my opinion.
A wonderful end to a great story, but also sad that Nate didn't live to see his son.
Loved the story as it developed, perhaps a bit too much time in the sorority 'pranks' but overall a five star effort. Unlike some you knew when and how to end this, good job. Thanks.
Read all chapters when they came out. Hate the way the new mom is forgiven. I am not part of the BTB crowd, but she made her kids lives' a nightmare for 18 years. Just to teach them something?
Well done overall. Enjoyed it as a whole.
Val
I want to thank all of you who read the entire story. In doing so you have read my first novel, erotic or otherwise. I did a little research and Sorority Pledge qualifies.
You did a great job with this story. I really enjoyed the whole thing. Sad to see it end so quickly.