All Comments on 'Source from the Past'

That was a fun short story

I thought it was cute too. Would make a nice series.

Liked it! Good Story! I think you're on a roll!

Now that he has 1 knocked up and a Recommend to her Cousin maybe more Friends and Family will Visit?

I Agree would be a Good Series.

The idea is great, but it really needs to go through an editing pass. It was really difficult to read.

You are incredibly prolific I see. Not a bad story; very short. Draw it out a little and if you can find one, some one to help proof read.