by Bakeboss
You are incredibly prolific I see. Not a bad story; very short. Draw it out a little and if you can find one, some one to help proof read.
The idea is great, but it really needs to go through an editing pass. It was really difficult to read.
Now that he has 1 knocked up and a Recommend to her Cousin maybe more Friends and Family will Visit?
I Agree would be a Good Series.