by SassyGal84
Nothing really happened here.....it nice to see an update, but please make something happen in the next chapter.
I'm glad this is continuing. While not much happens in this chapter, I did like the further insight into the characters this chapter provided.
Do you plan to continue this story? I ask because this chapter was delayed quite a while. I would hate to see it not come to a conclusion.
The story is progressive ng at a rather leisurely pace but the characters are interesting and the setup has great promise. I do hope there is more to come. I really would like to see what inventions Ben brings with him.
Thanks for the contribution.
It nice to know more is in the pipeline.
Hope to see it soon.
Thanks for contributing.
In 2022.
For what it is worth, I had been enjoying this story. You spin an interesting tale. But when updates are only a page or two, I can't keep my interest up if I have to wait more than a few weeks. My problem, not yours but it does kill a story for me.
Good luck in the future.