All Comments on 'Southern Delights Ch. 04'

by SassyGal84

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SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusabout 8 years ago

Nothing really happened here.....it nice to see an update, but please make something happen in the next chapter.

GlassfaceGlassfaceabout 8 years ago

I'm glad this is continuing. While not much happens in this chapter, I did like the further insight into the characters this chapter provided.

ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilabout 8 years ago
Sorry to ask but...

Do you plan to continue this story? I ask because this chapter was delayed quite a while. I would hate to see it not come to a conclusion.

The story is progressive ng at a rather leisurely pace but the characters are interesting and the setup has great promise. I do hope there is more to come. I really would like to see what inventions Ben brings with him.

Thanks for the contribution.

SassyGal84SassyGal84about 8 years agoAuthor
Re: Sorry to ask but...

I'm editing chapter 5 now! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved it !!!!!!

Love to see some new work soon can't wait !!!!!!!!!!

ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilabout 8 years ago
Looking forward to the next chapter

It nice to know more is in the pipeline.

Hope to see it soon.

Thanks for contributing.

ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilalmost 8 years ago
I'll check back

In 2022.

For what it is worth, I had been enjoying this story. You spin an interesting tale. But when updates are only a page or two, I can't keep my interest up if I have to wait more than a few weeks. My problem, not yours but it does kill a story for me.

Good luck in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
please hurry with next chapter

great story....waiting for next chapter

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