by Pro_Ball_Player
These truly are just about the best stories I have enjoyed on Literotica. Thank you for the pleasure you are giving me - please keep on writing.
Where can I sign up? I have dreamed of this. My husband has dreamed of this.
Cudos my friend. You have done a masterful job so far and can't wait to see if you get your cock into Jan while kenny watches. Keep up the great writing.
Doug
A great time for liftoff to hard sex, then move on to a little more pain - possibly a belt? Looking forward to chapter 5 - keep up the supurb writing!
I found this series while looking for spanking stories and they are really good. My wife and I have read each one and we love them. I'll send you a private feedback. Please write more!
I am so glad you decided to post your work in Literotica, because this, plus the others have been beyond super. Loved the interaction between the three of them, and Jan's reaction of losing total control of lust. Also LOVED the payment of soaking panties. Nothing better than that. Great job. Looking forward to the last chapter, though I'm sorry to see it end. Please keep writing writing writing!
I love your pace, word choice and your sexual imagination. Wonderful.
This series is my absolute favorite. I return to it time and time again. It's like he has gone into my head and written down all my fantasies. Incredibly well written and erotic. I hope to read more from this author. He absolutely understands what a woman wants. Well done.