All Comments on 'Special Delivery Ch. 06'

Disappointing epilogue. Would have prefered the story without it tbh if it's this bad. Needs a rewrite asap! It's not a satisfying ending. So much is left unexplored.

As you wrote in your intro to this story : "I don't know about you, but I hate it when I like a story, only to find it leaves me hanging at the end because the author has abandoned it."

In my humble opinion, your story would have been better abandoned after chapter five. This 1300 word 'chapter' just does not fit with the nice flow of your earlier chapters.

As NSFW999 wrote, 'so much left unexplored.'

I do hope you will take on a sequel or continuation.