by MFD
Wow, a sequel already! I must compliment you, your style has improved dramatically from the previous chapter of SAS. I was quite surprised to find it very easy reading. However, I personally found some parts or the language/wording you used to be a little crude for /me/.
A marked improvement, I'm amazed.
This story is very well done! I really like that you didn't confuse the Point of view as so many of the authors on this site sometimes do. i do hope we'll be seeing more of this story soon.
You Promised More.. I for one would love to read more of Their story. Does sis come back does she ask to have Female Lovers w/o him Getting any from the others. and him not doing anyone else but Her? would be selfish but then People are selfish.