All Comments on 'Spontaneous Anal Suggestion Ch. 02'

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DesamyDesamyover 19 years ago
Leap in capability

Wow, a sequel already! I must compliment you, your style has improved dramatically from the previous chapter of SAS. I was quite surprised to find it very easy reading. However, I personally found some parts or the language/wording you used to be a little crude for /me/.

A marked improvement, I'm amazed.

Landrious1Landrious1about 19 years ago
Excellent story!

This story is very well done! I really like that you didn't confuse the Point of view as so many of the authors on this site sometimes do. i do hope we'll be seeing more of this story soon.

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
Ending????

You Promised More.. I for one would love to read more of Their story. Does sis come back does she ask to have Female Lovers w/o him Getting any from the others. and him not doing anyone else but Her? would be selfish but then People are selfish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More Damnit

Wonderful set of stories, but more damnit.

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