All Comments on 'Spotted Ch. 01'

Great story! Well written vivid and fun!

I enjoyed this!

Nice first chapter leading ...where...?.........lots of possible scenarios, looking forward to the the next one.

A hot start story, with class. As in line with others, Continue...... please. Yes that type of please... finish. And continue

What a fantastic story. Hot. Classy. Beautifully written.

You MUST finish.

Can't wait.

I noted that this was your first and only submission on here, and I have to say, wow. This story was beautifully written. You have a natural talent, and it's too bad that this is your only story so far. I agree with the others, please continue. This is by far my favorite story on this site. Kudos.

This turned me on lol. Keep going bro

5 stars would read again.