All Comments on 'Spotted Ch. 01'

5 stars would read again.

This turned me on lol. Keep going bro

I noted that this was your first and only submission on here, and I have to say, wow. This story was beautifully written. You have a natural talent, and it's too bad that this is your only story so far. I agree with the others, please continue. This is by far my favorite story on this site. Kudos.

What a fantastic story. Hot. Classy. Beautifully written.

You MUST finish.

Can't wait.

A hot start story, with class. As in line with others, Continue...... please. Yes that type of please... finish. And continue

Nice first chapter leading ...where...?.........lots of possible scenarios, looking forward to the the next one.

I enjoyed this!

Great story! Well written vivid and fun!