All Comments on 'Spring Break Submission Ch. 02'

Are you writing any more? :) i have loved it so far!

More please!! :)

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She screams out "you're huge!" She's nearly a virgin, pretty much any cock is going to feel huge to her. All in all the story was alright. I didn't buy the trio of tough guys backing down to the college punk though, but I suppose you felt you had to display how "dominant" Brian is. Actually what Brian is, is a rapist with anger management issues and what Rachel is, is an idiot for not calling the police on him first chance she got. This is a fairly typical rape fantasy though and really belongs in non-consent, not bdsm.