All Comments on 'Spritely Fellow Ch. 01'

You have a very interesting start and easy to follow, I'd love to see what you'll do next with him.

This is turning out to be a LONG story, so if you could tell me how large you want the installments and any directions you would like to avoid, that would be great.

Also if you have any supernatural things or requests for story objects, now is the time.

*Sigh*

I'm already hooked.

Oh my heavens. you have a great book here if you continue, and if the story stays this way completely through you have a sell-able one on your hands. I like the premise and style keep it up.

I, like the other post-ers, have been drawn in. A very unique and engaging start. Looking forward to the next installment, and you have been added to my list of stories to look out for!