All Comments on 'Stacy's First Porno'

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Rad'lRad'lover 16 years ago
A good story -

a little outrageous - but a good story nevertheless. Has anyone submitted a real life, personal, account of action such as this?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
amazing...

definately amazing, write more.

naughtynikinaughtynikiover 16 years ago
Great

It was such a turn on.I hope you will write more like this.

KingRichard923KingRichard923over 13 years ago
Hot beyond imagination

Not only a nice run through of what to expect by her friend Gina. But, when rewarded so unexpectedly hot and raw by Stacy, all I wanted, was to be there, one of those lucky, first time, three man cast. I am sure all who read this will find that Stacy needs a full time career at the studios.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wish it was on video

Great ass fucking - only wish I could watch the video. Loved Tim's small talk about what he was going to do to her - lots of good graphic detail. Can't wait to read part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please proofread

I like the ideas and descriptions in your stories, but I literally couldn't finish due to the misspelled and misused words.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

Anonymous is a dick . A couple misspelled words can't ruin good erotica . Well done . One of your best . And this is only chapter 1 .

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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