All Comments on 'Staring At The Ocean Ch. 07'

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DesertPirateDesertPiratealmost 18 years ago
Nice!

A sweet ending to a great story. I really like your writing and hope you continue. You gave us enough plot twists to keep anyone happy. Thanks!

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
AWWWW....man

hate to see this one end, i was surely enjoying it *smile*...thank you for allowing us to read you, this was so different in so many ways..look forward to reading whatever you have next for us. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Paniolo BoyPaniolo Boyover 17 years ago
Couldn't put this down!!!!

Loved every chapter. Hope you'll do another series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good

But I found it a little putzy, what with the million children that follow the two week non-romance between boss and secretary, plus kidnapping. It just felt like it had been done in ten thousand harlequins before it. That being said, I think you have potential to develop into a great writer, please keep it up.

Heather_LeeHeather_Leeabout 14 years ago
What a great story!

I enjoyed the story of Cheyenne, Jordan and the others tremendously. I loved it. Such a sweet ending. What a talented author.

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