by Grey Eagle 286
Your story is going downhill so fast that I fell off and stopped reading. I do not condone adultery and am offended by the whores and sluts and queers in this piece of shit excuse for an erotic story. Your sick fans can now tell you how they think that you are wonderful and how this trash is worthy of an award for literary greatness. And I say "Bullshit".
Grey Eagle:
TLee stopped too soon, or perhaps not. He'd probably really gone off the deep end when he found out Tom loved Frank. Keep writing the story. I'm happy. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Personally, I find your stories to be very insightful and reflective of the wide variety of interpersonal relations to be found in many parts of the world. There should be no bounds for writing, as the writer is expressing their thoughts just like the people who comment on the stories are expressing theirs. If Tlee doesn't like your writing ....too bad for him/her. That persons comments are a vivid reminder of the narrowminded puritanical thoughts of the hippocritical people in the world.
/s/Brian
Polyamory is a mixed bag of emotions.
A dangerous way to open a good relationship.