by canuckCD
... love story and refereshingly different from other stories published here ... well done!
A refreshing contribution of style and perspective that you could expand at any time. Please continue!
Your writing is very good.I hope you keep on writing. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Good story and you did caption this as chapter 01, so hopefully there is more about the two of them in the not too distant future.
Wow! Brings back a long ago love that I will never forget! Very beautiful. Thank you. Hope there is more to this story.
Your description of Stephanie was so erotic it was as if the reader was there with her. It has a great story line and I find it very erotic.
Please post more chapters soon, and thank you.
Thank you all for the wonderful comments.
I do have a version of chapter 2 already written, but I am currently re-writing it before I post it. Hopefully, it will be ready soon.
This is a difficult story to follow up, as the first part was almost entirely true, and the 2nd & 3rd parts were a dream I had that night. Surprisingly, I had remembered enough of the dream to be able to write it all down the next day. Any future chapters will be entirely made up as I go.
if they dont end up with eachother stop now. it would be too fucked up for them to split up.
I really like this story. The only thing that kind of threw me was when she kept mentioning her old boyfriend. Other than that it was great.