All Comments on 'Stephen Ch. 01'

WOW what a great start...more please ...I am so wet and horny I can hardly stand it!!

Chapter two should be up today, anon. I submitted them at the same time. Lit's just staggering them a little to tease you. ;)

Please keep it going, had my interest from the start and nice build up.

title said it all

This story was very good. Im not much of a critic, and dont say a whole lot of negative stuff and really hardly comment, but I feel that I really owe it to authors that I feel have done an excellent job, and this is an excellent example of a quality work, atleast to me.

Rinny

That was a tasty start, I'm looking forward to chapter two already.

hot!

Very, very nice - and that's meant to cover both chapters. It was great how he treated Stephen so kindly, helped him reconcile with what he was, and had fun at the same time. Including making every effort to give the two girls pleasure too.