All Comments on 'Story House'

I'm sorry, it was a good start, but the grammar and spelling errors are too distracting. Did any proof this before it was posted?

U gots finish dis story 4real it's good keep doin ya thing 4real

the plot is gud plz finish the story soon..

first of all let me thank all my viewers for reading my story! I'm sorry to say but it's true that it was not intended to publish this early.I didn't even get the time for proof reading properly. so please if you can then excuse me for those extreme spelling and grammar mistakes!:-(

it is my first submission in Literotica and I know I've completely fucked it up!

again thanks to all of you.

broken2992.

PLEASE, Continue On. Sure There Are Errors, But This

Is Your First Submission. And Thats A Lot Better Than

Myself Whom Have Submitted None ! !

On A Personal Note - I Hope That She Warms Up As

She Finds Love. Seems That She Is A Cold Bitch Right

Now. Tenderness & Warmth Should Develop With

True Love.

Thank's For Chapter 1, Looking Fiorward To The Next

Chapter.

Never mind the small insignificant errors you did a wonderful job!!! For a first submission this is a good story with a great plot! I love how they both have feelings for each other but don't dare to tell each other about it! I absolutely can't wait to read more I can see many parts coming from this story there so many directions you can take it in! So please please please continue!!!!! :-)

finish the story, i just visited thrice to know what happens next !!!!!

Please finish this ! Never mind the grammar , not all of us are geniuses ya know. Just finish this ! I need to know what happen to Chris man

Please continue the story!! I really liked it! I wanna know what happens next :)

please continue this one..i have been waiting for a long time now!!please!! i am dead serious to find out what happen next!!

this is a good first story

I couldn't finish this. All the grammar mistakes really made it hard to read.

This is my fourth time reading this story. I only wish that you would have added more chapters.

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