All Comments on 'Stray Prey Ch. 02'

I wondered where this story had gone to after I read the initial installment. Keep it coming.

please !!!!!!!!! write more,more,more. can;t wait for the next chapter

coming...I'm sooo looking forward to reading more!

It's truly interesting and is keeping me guessing. At first, I thought Quentin might be a "bad guy," and now I'm thinking perhaps he really was overwhelmed by the moment and his own desire for Rosaline. In other words, he had no evil intent. So who is the stray and what's his story? Why did he suddenly feel weak and nauseous at Rosaline's place?<br><br>

Then you introduced a whole new angle, with the young mother and her baby, and Dominic. I'm intrigued by their story as well. <br><br>

My only suggestion is to double check for spelling errors. I saw a number of them throughout. Spell check might help. But other than that, I think this is a really good story.

Can't wait for the rest.