by Spartacus
Hi,
Yes veru good. more please.
Good fucking under tuff conditions...
More please./..
Les
As a white Marine vet, I especially enjoyed this story and would like to read more like it. Melvin is my kid of giy...but I'd like to read more about Lt. Olson and her possible future relationships w/ other black soldiers and maybe even with Sgt. Steinway!
really sticks to the reader's attention. Hoping to see a follow-up.
Like in the movie bogart thought that song was the best. I think stuck in country should be re-visited again and again please make it into a multi volume something to treasure in the future
This series with Melvin is excellent. Please write another installment.
Type! Type!! Type!!!
I also need to know what happens to Georgia. Will she show up again...
TYPE!
Loved the story! Would like to read about a reunion
of Melvin and Tammy (with child ?). Maybe some of Tammy's dreams.
your writing is so hot an erotic, i trully enjoyed this, you touched on a subject i havent come across on this site, vietnam era sex. We all know that this was a turbulent time in america and you wre able you were able to bring the sex to the jungle, and that is hot, keep the stories coming.
Great story. Cannot wait for the continuation of the Lt and sarg :)
A very lovely, and lustful (with purpose) story. I'd love to see more about/of these characters together... Maybe even after they've returned from the war.
More please, want to see Tammy and Melvin hookup and Tammy tells Melvin that she is pregnant?
I too would like to see at least one more chapter. I'll echo the comments the other guy said. How about they meed again on the Freedom Bird taking them home. Then during a refueling or customs stop in Hawaii they have coffee together. Then she could tell him that he knocked her up and when the baby would be due, maybe in about seven to eight months. Could lead into another chapter about a couple deciding to have an interracial marriage back in those time. Not always a cool thing back then. Anyway just a suggestion.