by ddwriter
very hot - please continue with the next chapter about hayley that evening - and others about the student nurses!
That sort of build-up is ultra intense and so is your entire story!
Whats the matter with with you male authors? Everything is exaggerated to the point its no fun reading. take a hint from some of the gal writers in here and make it more believable!
Ddwriter,
Simply superb. My fantasy in words.
Pls continue writing.
Well done.
The tease would have been erotic if only it were well written and the nurses motivations were more aparent. This needs character development or else you're just writing porn.
Erotica is literature, remember that
I loved this story. Definitely gave me a hard on...and left me wanting more! Any chance of a sequel?
This is a very erotic story and it certainly had me hard and juicy very quickly. I was expecting Ben to come at any time but you left us waiting for the next chapter - can't wait to hear what happens next - will he or wont he come and who will make him lose control?
I had to let go of my frustration after reading your story.
More please!!!!!!
This is the most intense tease and denial stroy i've ever read!
Gratulation, it should be continued! :)
Hayley is my consummate care nurse. Good hands. Nice boobs and
Willing to experiment for the sake of science. Gulp!