All Comments on 'Student Nurses: Hayley'

by ddwriter

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hitsomeskinshitsomeskinsover 18 years ago
loved it - please write more!

very hot - please continue with the next chapter about hayley that evening - and others about the student nurses!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
nice build-up!

That sort of build-up is ultra intense and so is your entire story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great story

Super hot story. I really hope there is going to be a part #2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
trash

Whats the matter with with you male authors? Everything is exaggerated to the point its no fun reading. take a hint from some of the gal writers in here and make it more believable!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Superb

Ddwriter,

Simply superb. My fantasy in words.

Pls continue writing.

Well done.

AnitoleAnitoleabout 15 years ago
You really need to edit your work

The tease would have been erotic if only it were well written and the nurses motivations were more aparent. This needs character development or else you're just writing porn.

Erotica is literature, remember that

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fantastic

I loved this story. Definitely gave me a hard on...and left me wanting more! Any chance of a sequel?

willycumwillycumover 12 years ago
So erotic!!

This is a very erotic story and it certainly had me hard and juicy very quickly. I was expecting Ben to come at any time but you left us waiting for the next chapter - can't wait to hear what happens next - will he or wont he come and who will make him lose control?

I had to let go of my frustration after reading your story.

More please!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
fantastic!

This is the most intense tease and denial stroy i've ever read!

Gratulation, it should be continued! :)

zex95966zex95966over 10 years ago
I like all your stories...

I'd read more if you wrote more =P

WatcherRobWatcherRobabout 8 years ago
ultimate cock teaser

Hayley is my consummate care nurse. Good hands. Nice boobs and

Willing to experiment for the sake of science. Gulp!

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