by MaaddMaaxx
On reading, I felt it was an outstanding story-- and indeed I am still outstanding even after....
That was a great second chapter that you wrote about Anne, Kate and Erik. I like how you develop the story between the three of them at the start of this chapter after ending it in the last chapter. I love how you wrote the sequence of Anne losing her virginity to Erik and how he made her feel beautiful and sexy just before he took her virginity. I can hardly wait to see what you do with the next chapter between the three of them.