All Comments on 'Study Abroad Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
outstanding

On reading, I felt it was an outstanding story-- and indeed I am still outstanding even after....

marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Great Second Chapter!!!

That was a great second chapter that you wrote about Anne, Kate and Erik. I like how you develop the story between the three of them at the start of this chapter after ending it in the last chapter. I love how you wrote the sequence of Anne losing her virginity to Erik and how he made her feel beautiful and sexy just before he took her virginity. I can hardly wait to see what you do with the next chapter between the three of them.

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