All Comments on 'Subliminal Broadcaster 2000'

Very well written.

Attention to detail is a must. You jumped from the 1000 to 2ooo without explanation. The directions to victims is vague & grammar is missing completely. A proof reader would be a good start.

So MC went from wanting Michelle as his own wife to making her a slave that will sleep at the foot of his bed and service his guests? I have to agree with the last post, consistency is an issue with this one.